Thursday, March 1, 2012

Premonitions...


Oh, Flashes of future,
Impossibly disjoint,
If we don’t get you,
Then what is the point?

From your glimpses,
Of chances untold,
How would I know
What tomorrow will hold?


You show me life,
And impending doom,
In quick succession,
While in the same room.

I have no clue,
What’s set in store
Your confusing hints,
Leave my mind sore

Twisted feelings,
Of Deja-Vu and fears
Hard to fathom,
Across indeterminate years

All that you bring,
With unconfirmed visions,
Are nameless thoughts,
And tough decisions

I’d rather not share,
Your sudden peeks,
Of a world in which,
Uncertainty speaks

Many would cherish,
Your daily insights
Though it be wrought
In the shadows of night.

So, spare me your gift,
Of partial knowledge
I prefer the surprises,
Though I stand on the edge.

11 comments:

  1. Still experimenting with the 'short verse' style of poetry. Let me know if it gets too annoying... :/

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  3. pretty deep.... gud one

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  4. neglected........no updates!

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  5. Apologies... hope the next post explains their absence.

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  6. the next post does explain the conflict taht ur body has with the typo-they just don't want u to get going!get back to work later.........because reading them are terrible!pain i say.sorry for being taht rude but it seriously made me miss words and i wanted to end reading it asap-a1

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  7. No. The rudeness is a refreshing change. I'll feel great about myself once I can write decent stuff again.

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  8. taht is good -a1!sportive i must say- a1

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  9. make sure to leave soem cmnts incase u check on teh blog :) they look nice after a piece - a1

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